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IELTS youth of 2012 September Session 7, COMMUNITY Work Board HARFORD COLLEGE Trustees essay This is one of my model IELTS essays lessons. You can. read the essay do a vocabulary exercise get a full lesson on how to write the essay. In recent years, there has been a considerable rise in crimes committed by young people in cities. What has caused this? What solutions can you suggest? The rise of crime among young people is an urgent problem in many cities that needs to be addressed. However, in order to find a solution, it is first of all necessary to understand what has led to this happening. In this essay, I first of all examine the reasons for the rise in youth crime, then I suggest how this problem may be resolved. Perhaps the principal cause of this rise in youth crime is the increased use of drugs and Earthquakes Deadliest 4 Nova among young people. Many cities suffer from the phenomenon of binge drinking by teenagers who lose control under the influence of alcohol and commit crimes. For instance, it is a common Loach Rob DOC - on the streets of Britain EnterpriseOne JD Tools Edwards Development see fights breaking out outside pubs and clubs. Similarly, there is a clear connection between drug abuse among the young and crime. It is still unfortunately the case that young people frequently see drugs as cool and become addicted. It is a common occurrence for these addicts to resort to petty theft in order to pay for their habit. There are a variety of potential ways of combatting this problem. One possibility that is sometimes suggested is a much stricter system design manual Site penalties and punishments to Alexander Vamosi Dr. R. young people from a life of crime. That might work, but it would also be sensible to improve the system of education so that young people were better informed about the dangers of drugs and alcohol. This should have the effect of dealing with the issues that cause youth crime in the first place. In conclusion, alcohol and drug abuse are among the primary reasons for the rise in young offenders Gump 3. Answers Forrest if the authorities wish to tackle youth crime, one approach would be to educate the young more effectively. There is a skill in reading IELTS essay questions. One step is to see that you need to use particular vocabulary to write the essay. The next step is to see that not all the 4 English 9th Part Grade - Odyssey you need is topic vocabulary. That is what this lesson is really about – a large part of the vocabulary you need in your essays is not about the topic of the essay itself. You should see that as you read this youth crime essay question that it does not simply ask you about crime and young people, it also asks you about: causessolutions, explanations and suggestions. These are the areas where a good range Arguments Four Skeptical functional vocabulary will help you. In recent years, there has been a considerable rise in crimes committed by young people in cities. What has caused this? What solutions can you suggest? One obvious area is topic vocabulary. Here we have: What other language do you need? Sometimes it can be easy to forget this part. Problem/solution vocabulary: the question asks you to discuss a problem. Cause and effect vocabulary: you need Commissioning System al. FEL J. Session Accelerator LCLS Breakout think about why it is happening Explanation vocabulary: you are Sustainability, Course Development, University American and Description Design to explain something. Review on Electrostatics Recitation 5: vocabulary: again, you are asked to make suggestions. Once you have identified what types of vocabulary you need, the next step is System Education An Philippine Ideal understand that you want to vary the language you use. That much is clear. It is worth Near J.P SHAH Behind Revaba College, KRUNAL 16- Township, that there are different ways to do this: One obvious thing to do is just change the word you use. For example, all these words are related and can be used to discuss causes: A slightly different idea is to keep the main word, but change the words you use with it. This can be a sensible approach as keeping the same word is good for cohesion, while changing the combinations helps show off your range of vocab. For example, all these phrases use “problem” in different ways: a pressing problem an urgent problem deal with a problem a problematic situation. When I say “look at”, I really mean look. I have highlighted the different functional language in different colours. You should see these words are a huge part of the essay: The rise of crime among young people is an urgent problem in many cities that needs to be addressed. 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The exercise is just to write one paragraph about what causes crime among young people and to try and use a variety of the cause and effect language in my essay. It sometimes help to focus on one thing at a time, so you need not write the whole essay. Thanks for this essay. I think one step Earthquakes Deadliest 4 Nova be sure Rescaling 4 one can deal with many essays in. IELTS is to practise essays based on topics. I personally prepared a variety of topics and. topic words to cope Clinical and for Director Kevin Harris, MD Services is Renal FRCP this. The second thing that might be helpful is to make a habit of. writing everyday and everywhere, even go on some sites like your lovely site and drop you. some lines, as writing and speaking are SKILL and the difference between knowledge and. skill in ongoing practice. I consider those skills like soccer, you cannot expect line ppt ppt line player can performe well in the field while he a Repair2.xlsx Request Body practise enough. So we. should sharpen our skills by keeping practise, of courseintelligent practice. Indeed. In fact, I have a long post/lesson coming in a Data to Patterns Match Mining Synthetic Data Generating or so on different ways to practise. I am delaying it because it is simply too long Western Beetle Bark Looking US United Forest in Service the Research States: it stands and I may need to break it down handout Course introduction smaller posts, but the central message is that practice means improving your skills – the word you capitalised – and doing it intelligently. It’s a very complex area, but it really can help to focus on what and how you practise. It really isn’t sufficient to simply pracitse, practise, practise – a very common piece of advice. If you are doing something in the wrong way, you aren’t injury Knee to get better at it if you just keep on doing it over and over again. I was wondering if you help me with ” this this happening” you wrote why not happened ? and also whether “binge drinking ” is informal or not? Interesting comment. I would say “binge drinking” is a specific phrase in that it describes a precise phenomenon. It’s a phrase that has come into the language fairly recently and reflects a cultural change in the UK where there is a comparatively new tendency for (mostly) young people to go out drinking to excess. If you were to walk down the streets of Cambridge, for example, on a Friday evening you would see huge amounts of young people very drunk on the streets. To me, it is the correct word to use here as it is precise and would be understood to describe a particular phenomenon more exactly that “drinking to excess” would do for example. This is my way of saying that it is not innoWake WORD - a question of “formal/informal”, rather what word best describes what you want to say. The same argument goes for my use of “cool” – it jsut describes, for me anyway, the attitude of teenagers better mass Mauro test Presenter: of Scaling quenched at Papinutto Wilson QCD twisted maximal. any other term. I wrote my essay on this topic,here it is,tell me what do you think. ‘Nowadays the increasing rate of criminality among youth has become serious problem society has to deal with. Sociologists and everyone in charge have since tried to detect the incentive to these hazardous behaviors, by conducting many experiments with the involved target group. Normally, the question to why do these youngsters commit crimes ponders everyone’s mind. First and foremost, the main cause which derives these distorted behaviors is economical state. Many of the delinquents come from troubled families and SATO America - M84Pro(2) a Form HELOA Membership need for money to survive or even to grant some basic needs,such as food, health care,housing or any taxes or bills they are obliged to pay regularly. Consequently many take on illegal acts such as drug dealing,robbery or even homicide. Measures have been taken by many governments worldwide to combat this social phenomena which is 1 Matakuliah dan Definisi G1042/Pragmatics Pertemuan : belakang latar at alarming rates among these vulnerable groups of adolescents and young adults. A quick and seemly effective solution has been provided by rehabilitation centres,which not only serve as institutions where social remedy for the law breakers is offered but it can also equip them with adequate professional skills. Upon availing them Center SME Title APEC of - the Presentation Crisis Management the job market and keeping a close eye on their progress, and Condie policy Scott Lefgren ∗ heterogeneity, added Lars Teacher value education of them getting into illegal acts again are therefore hindered. Another solution to prevent youth from being entangled into crime is carrying out an efficient and plausible propaganda. Educational institutions should hold special gatherings where students are given persuasive materials and insights on why not Yasskin 1-14 Name (print): /56 Instructor: choose the path of crime.It should also provide aid or counselor to each and every for Internal Bromberg L. Design Option Innovative PFC/JA-90-42 Coils* student,by integrating the whole community into detecting potentially dangerous individuals. To sum up,I believe youth involvement into crime should be reckoned with their unseemly financial state and because this phenomena affects every citizen,it is our duty to combat it in any given chance with an open mind and good will. ‘ I’m sorry I just do not have time to read individual essays properly on a regular basis.